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Honestly I miss you
More than I can say
And darling it's getting harder to pretend,
Every day, I miss you, Just wanna see your smile
It's been too long since you've been home
Could you maybe stop on by?

The day you left my heart broke into pieces
By nightfall I was already bleeding out
The day you left I thought I wouldn't make it
God only knows how I'm standing now

You were my everything,
Nothing could have meant more
You took my heart threw it through glass
Maybe I'm shattered, But I'll keep waiting by the door

And I need to stop my rhyming sense
These metaphors you won't comprehend
Always double backing what I say
Cause I'm walking in circles

Expressing myself from displays of passion
Can't keep up with the constant asking
Why'd you let her go?
When are you coming home?
It's been a lonely winter without you by my side

I don't know if I can hold on,
I am not this strong!
I'll waste my whole life [away]
You were my everything,
Nothing could have meant more
You took my heart threw it through glass
Maybe I'm shattered, But I'll keep waiting by the door

Till you come home
I'll continue to pray
Hopeless waiting for you to turn around

The day you left my heart broke into pieces
By nightfall I was already bleeding out
The day you left I thought I wouldn't make it
God only knows how I'm standing now

You were my everything,
Nothing could have meant more
You took my heart threw it through glass
Maybe I'm shattered, But I'll keep waiting by the door
Special thanks to Amy [link]
for the title (:

All comments/faves are very appreciated!!
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gothycfliq954 Featured By Owner Mar 5, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
O.O wow, this is amazing! Such beautiful lyrics, very meaningful and strong. You've got a lot of talent, you'll definitely be rewarded in the future. Keep it up :)
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RedHeadedBitch Featured By Owner Mar 14, 2012   Writer
Thank you!! these songs take a lot out of me, I'm really glad you like it (: that means a lot
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gothycfliq954 Featured By Owner Mar 19, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
Your very welcome. Honestly, I don't see how I could not love it, it's such an amazing song and the lyrics are outstanding :D
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lostlightxxx Featured By Owner Mar 5, 2012  Student Writer
if the artists of today used your lyrics, music would be much better.
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RedHeadedBitch Featured By Owner Mar 14, 2012   Writer
(: wow, thank you so much!!!! that means a lot to hear <3
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AmyATOMIC-x Featured By Owner Mar 1, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
New title: Still picking up the pieces
(:

This is lovely though, really really well written :aww:

AA<3.
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RedHeadedBitch Featured By Owner Mar 1, 2012   Writer
LOVE IT!! THANK YOU!!!
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AmyATOMIC-x Featured By Owner Mar 1, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Haha, you're welcome :)

AA<3.
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